Friday, July 01, 2011

For a Cup of Tea

C&CTea

The Mashima* at 37B/1 was very stingy. Miser might be a better word to describe her. She complained about everything, about the corners not being swept, the brown stain not being scrubbed well from the teapot, the Rin bar getting over on the 28th instead of the 31st and about how much tea Manju drank throughout the day.

And the last one wasn't even true. But Manju kept quiet. The money here was good, Mashima's son who lived in Dallas made sure that Manju was paid well. And why only Manju ? He made sure that the cook Sarla's Ma, the watchman, the driver everyone got a good salary. Last time when he was here, he even gave Manju a perfume. It smelled of forest woods and dead flowers. One whiff and she would be transported to the tree laden haven of her childhood where the scent of new leaves mingled with wild flowers.

But Mashima was very unlike her son. As Manju swept the floors and scrubbed the bathroom, Mashima hovered along side always keeping an eye that Manju did not pour more bleach than necessary, did not run water for too long. And when Manju dusted the glass cabinets, carefully wiping the golden rimmed tea cups, the coffee mug with the blue windmill, the terracotta cups with white paisley pattern, Mashima sat at the dining table reminding Manju to be extra careful because they were all very expensive.

The only time she softened was when Manju took out the coffee mugs, the ones with pictures of two little girls smiling out of the cup, hair blowing in the wind and something written in English all around. They were Mashima's grand daughters. Every New Year, Mashima's son would send a coffee mug neatly snuggled in bubble wrap and ensconced in a colorful box. And every year the mug had a picture of the girls in different stages of their life.

Mashima never drank anything in those cups. Neither did she ever serve anyone in those.The cups and mugs in the glass cabinet sat just by themselves, supercilious and a tad bored .

"There is a story wrapped around each of them. Those cups are my memories", Mashima would say. The golden rimmed china was her wedding gift from an Aunt in England who is no more, the mug with the Eiffel Tower was from her honeymoon in Paris, the black tall mug with the warli painting was what her son got her on his first job and the New Year coffee mugs was her grand kid's life in front of her.

"If you ever drop any of them, I am going to fire you", Mashima would threaten, drinking her morning tea from a chipped plain white cup with a rounded bottom.Manju drank her tea from a steel glass.Wrapping the edge of her sari around its warmth, she took a long sip, making a sharp sound with her lips. The tea was lukewarm and not sweetened at all. Mashima had been stingy with the sugar yet again.With a sigh Manju poured out the tea from the verandah, onto the downstair neighbor's potted tulsi plant.

Really with tea like this, there was no reason to work here anymore. But she couldn't do without the money either. And then there were the afternoons for which she pined.

The afternoons, when Mashima would go for a walk and her evening gossip sessions at the nearby park, Manju would let herself in to do the dishes and sweep the floor for the last time in the day. This was when Manju would put water to boil in a kettle, pour a generous amount of milk, add spoonfuls of sugar and stir in the tea leaves. Lovingly she would peel a knob of ginger and pound it in the mortar and pestle, to put in the boiling tea.

She would then pour the pale brown liquor in a cup carefully chosen from the glass cabinet after much deliberation.

Sometimes when the day was cloudy and there was a wind rustling over the horizon Manju chose the one with blue windmill, on especially hot days she picked the cup with the smiling sunflowers. But most she loved to drink from the mugs with the two girls on it. She would sit in the verandah with the cup in her hand, staring at the two smiling girls and think of the long limbed, dusty haired, brown girl playing in her village where the scent of new leaves mingled with wild flowers.

As the tea grew cold, Manju sat, counting the days until she would next meet her daughter.

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*Mashima -- though it means aunt, elderly ladies in Bengal are respectfully addressed as Mashima

This is my entry for the Of Chalks and Chopsticks event started by Aqua and hosted by me this time. The photo cue for the fictions was here. I will be doing the roundup next week so if you are running late, please send in entries over the weekend.

39 comments:

  1. A lovely read Sandeepa. You snuk the maid's daughter in the same way she sneaked in the cups of tea in those precious mugs. Billiant rendition of a tragic story!

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  2. Jaya -- Thanks. Tragic ? Do you think so ? So many mothers go out to work whether it is for 8 hrs or 8 months stretch and yearn for their offspring. Substitute Manju with a traveling corporate Mom and her b***y boss, situations would be same, won't it ?
    Sad ? yeah but Tragic ? not really

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  3. Very vivid. I'm glad we're not like the mistresses of the previous generations who kept a strict watch on everything. I have to say I don't like them running too much water either, they just don't seem to understand it's a limited resource, and I do tell her everyday to limit the flow. Of course, not keeping an eye on their work tells on the housekeeping but we can't nag about everything, can we?

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  4. Sra

    Here, though my cleaning lady does a good work, she has her flaws. In that case I remind her before she starts work. My last cleaning lady left because my Ma-in-law(who was visiting) had said she did not dust the room well !!!
    I also get extremely tense with a fear that they might not do the work to my expectation so I prefer staying out of the house during that period :-D

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  5. Beautiful story and wonderful writing Sandeepa...I loved the way you wrote - wrapping her sari around the warmth of the tea :).
    your last comment resonates with me...I prefer my cleaning lady coming during my office hours otherwise I keep telling her "how" to do things and then it bugs me to see her not do it my way :P...

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  6. wow, what a beautiful and well written story. Thoroughly enjoyed it :)

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  7. lovely read Sandeepa. I was just wondering what that masima would do if she comes to know about her precious mugs been used this way....:-)

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  8. Very, very well written. It was as if I was witnessing Manju's day myself.
    The last line broke my heart.Here is Manju who is separated from her daughter due to poverty and need of money.

    Here I am sitting in an AC office leaving my kids at home everyday. I don't "need" the money. But if I stay home, I'll drive myself crazy yearning for the mental stimulation my work brings.

    Being a working mother, poor or rich, is very difficult.

    -Mili

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  9. what a lovely story and very well written. I'd love to read more short stories if you care to write and publish someday :-)

    - Mili

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  10. Lovely story! Liked how the cups were woven throughout. How nice that they did get used, whats the point of 'saving' them up.

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  11. Khub shundor kore details gulo diyecho. Khub bhalo laglo eyi chotto, smooth story ta pore. :-)

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  12. Loved reading your post. Nicely written

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  13. Beautiful story with the details very clearly etched!!! BTW wanted to let u know that i tried ur Macher kalia recipe and loved it!!!

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  14. A wonderful read. Loved it very much. I do wish the mistresses let out their human nature to peek out sometimes.

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  15. Nicely written! It is so typical of us desis to keep a hawk-eye on the cleaners! I did have a cleaner once who almost emptied a new bottle of bleach and I had the shiniest sink ever!!

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  16. Well written, San! Made for a nice read.

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  17. nice story - well written and I wonder why manju is heartless to drink the tea from the cups with mashima's grandaughters--- ;

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  18. Khub shundor golpo,Sandeepa!Loved reading it...you've beautifully woven a true fact of life into a very touching story:)

    Cheers,
    Wit,wok&wisdom

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  19. Hi Sandeepa,
    Nice story, could relate to a lot of it.."jeno dekhte pelam Manju aar Mashima ke"..
    ;-)
    Am leaving for India in a few days and have cups with me for the four grandparents this time!!
    I know they will never be used.....
    ;-))

    cheers
    d

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  20. An engaging story..The ending made me shiver as i pictured Manju drinking tea in the old lady's most prized possession..

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  21. This is the first time I read you're short story...it was fantastic.I have a love for short stories and the finesse in you're writing just left me spellbound...I was for a moment transported to my childhood days where I had seen similar behaviour of my 'dida' to the maid.....
    the ending was so good,just leaves you there with Manju and mashima....

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  22. Sandeepa,

    Hats off to you lady! You are gifted. I am an ardent fan of your writing and keep looking forward to your posts with utmost eagerness... You must take up writing as a profession!!!

    Regards,
    Seema
    amchi-bong-konnexion.blogspot.com
    seemabbas.blogspot.com

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  23. Amazing read Sandeepa. I simply love the way you manage to paint a picture with the words :). I've had only one maid in my married life so far and she was good at what she did. So I never complained. But 'Mashima' reminded me of my Boro Maami who used to do the same :D. I prefer to do all my household chores myself. That way I don't have to worry too much about things not getting done the way I like!

    Sohini

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  24. Thanks Everyone

    It was very interesting reading the different reactions and thoughts :) Your encouragement means a lot to me

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  25. Wow - what well rounded prose to frame such a beautiful story! :)

    Miri

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  26. I simply loved this idea and this event. I loved your imagination too. The story is really beautiful. Please read my version too at http://topsiturvilife.blogspot.com/2011/07/raindrops-were-hitting-hard-on-window.html

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  27. Hi Bongmom, I am so glad you took some time off and read my story. Thanks a lot. :)

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  28. Beautiful story...love the little bit of irony at the end.

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  29. Such a lovely story, Sandeepa. You should write a book!

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  30. My name is Arunima. I am in FB list.I have dropped a line there as well. I need to borrow your story. Need to talk/write to you. Please drop a line in FB or my email account.

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  31. Such vivid characterisation!!! Loved it. Got goosebumps.

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  32. What a twist to the tale Sandeepa . And the way you interspersed so many strains in it was wonderful .

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  33. Khub Bhalo laglo story ta pode :-)

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  34. Fantastic Sandeepadi... I love your style of writing - I can almost visualise Mashima:)

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  35. Beautifully written story. Totally loved it. Loved the way you have described every tiny detail - like Manju wrapping the edge of her saree pallu around her steel tumbler as she drank her tea. The descriptions are very vivid- I could see the entire story playing out in front of my mind's eye. You are a gifted writer.

    It was so sad to hear of Manju waiting to see her daughter, and being separated from her due to need for money. At the same time, it was also sad to see Manju sipping tea from the mugs with the pics of Mashima's granddaughters on them, when Mashima herself refrained from doing so.

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  36. very nice story ! plz continue to write such stories ......

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